For this round of madness, I would mostly like concrit on anything from 2017-2020. Those are either MCU Tony/Peter, MCU Peter/Quentin, or Fantastic Beasts Credence/Graves. There's a mix of fluff, smut, consent issues - I've tried to tag anything major.
Most of those are on the longer side - I'd also take concrit on Body of Lies works, which are shorter.
Comments here or via email (unsettledink / gmail) are preferred. Any level of bluntness is acceptable. I LOVE to discuss feedback further, if that's an option.
I welcome any general impressions or thoughts. For more specific questions:
Smut: How is the blocking working? Does it feel like there is a full range of sensory detailing? If it worked for you, why? What was appealing about it?
General: Did the summary do anything to pull you in or interest you? Did it give you a sense of what the fic was about, and was the fic what you expected? Did you get a sense of any themes? Does the title actively add to the fic, and/or does the context of it change after finishing? Does it feel like the plot carries through the entire fic? Do dialogue heavy sections lose a sense of setting? Anything that pulled you out of the story, or really grabbed you positively? Any places your attention drifted or you started skimming, or were confused? Did the ending feel earned, and as a reader did you feel satisfied with it? How does the pacing of the beginnings feel?
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Most of those are on the longer side - I'd also take concrit on Body of Lies works, which are shorter.
Comments here or via email (unsettledink / gmail) are preferred. Any level of bluntness is acceptable. I LOVE to discuss feedback further, if that's an option.
I welcome any general impressions or thoughts. For more specific questions:
Smut: How is the blocking working?
Does it feel like there is a full range of sensory detailing?
If it worked for you, why? What was appealing about it?
General:
Did the summary do anything to pull you in or interest you? Did it give you a sense of what the fic was about, and was the fic what you expected?
Did you get a sense of any themes?
Does the title actively add to the fic, and/or does the context of it change after finishing?
Does it feel like the plot carries through the entire fic?
Do dialogue heavy sections lose a sense of setting?
Anything that pulled you out of the story, or really grabbed you positively? Any places your attention drifted or you started skimming, or were confused?
Did the ending feel earned, and as a reader did you feel satisfied with it?
How does the pacing of the beginnings feel?