Concrit for derwent

[derwent_f]

I want to receive feedback by : comment on this post or on AO3.

Here are the works I want feedback on: any fic on my AO3.

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Mostly small fandoms. Content warnings can be found in tags or notes. For book-based fics, I tend to follow the book's writing style, so some of them are deliberately flowery.

I have these questions for readers:

• Repetitive stuff: do you notice any sentence structure/tics/tropes or anything else that I repeat, whether inside one fic or across different fics?
• Any suggestions on what I could have done differently? Different directions, alternate POV, etc.
• Do I explain things enough? Give enough context? Too obvious, too vague?
• If you're familiar with any of the fandoms: are the characters in-character?
• Anything else that comes to mind as you read!

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I don't mind direct feedback, but please also tell me what I got right so I can keep doing it.

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