mireia: Saturos and Menardi from Golden Sun holding an ear of corn menacingly. (Golden Sun - CORN)
mireia ([personal profile] mireia) wrote in [community profile] concrit_x2021-04-09 06:23 pm

Concrit For Mireia

I want to receive feedback by : Posting a comment here. The small fic collection you can post comments on the work itself if you'd like, but everything else I'd rather get feedback posted here.

Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything that's on my account.

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Small fandoms, mostly! I have works for Long Live the Queen, Stardew Valley, Final Fantasy II, and Golden Sun. All warnings should be listed in the tags.

I have these questions for readers:
  • If you know the fandom, did you think the characters were in-character and/or the themes went well with the canon?
  • Did the story flow well?
  • Did the characters, their motivations, and any growth seem believable to you?
  • Does anything seem vague or unexplained to the point of being confusing?
  • Did anything seem out of place, handled poorly, or take you out of the story?
  • Overall, did you enjoy the work?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Any and all impressions for writing or art. Feedback about SPAG or style is welcome, too. Don't be afraid to be direct if something doesn't work for you, but I do need to hear specifics about why it didn't.

Comments to this post will be: Screened.

Thank you for your time!


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