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I want to receive feedback by : Email at Galadriel1010 at gmail.com, on Discord at Galadriel1010#1516, or in comments on this post or the works on AO3.
Here are the works I want feedback on :
Any work finished from Jan 2020 onwards on my AO3. Selected highlights within the length are:
Original Work: Angry Words in Darkened Cells f/f fantasy work – 715 words
David Blaize: Sun's Warmth - David/Frank, 1695 words
Sherlock: Give or Take Mycroft/Lestrade – 3060 words
Doctor Who: How We Say It Here Thirteenth Doctor/Yaz/Christina – 4189 words
Raffles: A Different Beat Raffles/Bunny – 6527 words

My works' fandoms and content notes are:
Currently write in Sherlock, Dragon Age, various bits of the Doctor Who universe, and a bit from small fandoms including Raffles, David Blaize and Rivers of London. I have only 2 explicit works, and one is Nine Lessons and Carol where the sex is one scene in nearly 50000 words.

I have these questions for readers:
- Do I manage to match the tone of the writing to the mood of the story?
- Does my dialogue sound in character if you know the fandom, or like real people if you're not familiar with them?
- Does the scene setting add to or detract from the narrative, or just sort of exist?
- For the full adventure stories (How We Say It Here and A Different Beat), does the story flow well, is the pacing alright, are they believable?
- For the more vignette pieces (Angry Words, Sun's Warmth and Give or Take), is there enough context in the story to frame it, or could I use more explanation?
- Sun's Warmth and A Different Beat are both attempts to pastiche the original writing – if you know them, do I hit that?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is:
Please be kind? Friendly? I would love to get into a deep discussion about writing styles and technique on Discord if you're up for it. I don't want all-negative feedback, but I am keen to know areas I can improve on.

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