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concrit_x2022-06-24 09:01 am
witchorvegan) wrote in concrit_x2022-06-24 09:01 am
Concrit for witchorvegan
I want to receive feedback by : Comments on this post, or, if you prefer, Dreamwidth PM (witchorvegan).
Here are the works I want feedback on:
real hurt to give this real worth (Loveless, Kio/Soubi, 1725 words, rated M)
failure boy (K Project, Reisi/Saruhiko, 3432 words, rated T)
distress → flow (Hypnosis Mic, Jakurai & Doppo, 2017 words, rated T)
don't hesitate, darlin' (Hypnosis Mic, Jakurai/Hifumi/Doppo, 2648 words, rated E)
Untitled Final Fantasy XV WIP (Final Fantasy XV, Prompto/Noctis, 1870 words, rated M)
Fandoms and content notes: All fics, including that WIP, have content notes at the links. Make sure to read the tags, too, for the fics hosted on AO3.
Feedback questions: I'm especially interested in feedback on character interactions and their relationship dynamics - whether they feel "real" and compelling, or whether they fall flat. For sex/kink scenes (especially the needleplay in the Loveless fic), I'd love to know if you can picture the scene well and keep track of where everyone is within it, and if there are unfamiliar kinks, whether they're described in a way that makes sense to you. Notes on characterization and overall canon accuracy are also very welcome, if you know the canon.
For the Final Fantasy XV WIP specifically, I'd love any and all input on the injury descriptions, and whether you think it needs more information on Noct's underlying condition.
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I prefer straightforward feedback, whether it's positive or negative. Praise for specific aspects you liked is very welcome, but I have trouble picking out the actual concrit when people try to soften it with complements.
Spelling and grammar fixes aren't super useful for me, unless you notice a repeating problem that I should keep in mind for future fics - that's something I'd really appreciate you pointing out. The FFXV WIP is an exception here as I'm still writing it, though it is fairly polished (...I hope) and I definitely don't expect a full grammar edit.
Comments to this post will be: Unscreened.
witchorvegan).Here are the works I want feedback on:
real hurt to give this real worth (Loveless, Kio/Soubi, 1725 words, rated M)
failure boy (K Project, Reisi/Saruhiko, 3432 words, rated T)
distress → flow (Hypnosis Mic, Jakurai & Doppo, 2017 words, rated T)
don't hesitate, darlin' (Hypnosis Mic, Jakurai/Hifumi/Doppo, 2648 words, rated E)
Untitled Final Fantasy XV WIP (Final Fantasy XV, Prompto/Noctis, 1870 words, rated M)
Fandoms and content notes: All fics, including that WIP, have content notes at the links. Make sure to read the tags, too, for the fics hosted on AO3.
Feedback questions: I'm especially interested in feedback on character interactions and their relationship dynamics - whether they feel "real" and compelling, or whether they fall flat. For sex/kink scenes (especially the needleplay in the Loveless fic), I'd love to know if you can picture the scene well and keep track of where everyone is within it, and if there are unfamiliar kinks, whether they're described in a way that makes sense to you. Notes on characterization and overall canon accuracy are also very welcome, if you know the canon.
For the Final Fantasy XV WIP specifically, I'd love any and all input on the injury descriptions, and whether you think it needs more information on Noct's underlying condition.
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I prefer straightforward feedback, whether it's positive or negative. Praise for specific aspects you liked is very welcome, but I have trouble picking out the actual concrit when people try to soften it with complements.
Spelling and grammar fixes aren't super useful for me, unless you notice a repeating problem that I should keep in mind for future fics - that's something I'd really appreciate you pointing out. The FFXV WIP is an exception here as I'm still writing it, though it is fairly polished (...I hope) and I definitely don't expect a full grammar edit.
Comments to this post will be: Unscreened.