Concrit for Enisy

[enisy]

I want to receive feedback by: Comment on AO3 or on this Dreamwidth post

Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything on this filtered list, especially:

• On the Ineffable Love Between a Man and His Spacesuit (OW, rated Explicit, noncon, 2.7K)
• Predilection (OW, rated Explicit, 2.2K)
• Credo (Mass Effect, rated General Audiences, 1.8K)
• How the Other Half Lives (Ace Attorney, rated Teen and Up Audiences, 2.4K)
• L’amour et la mort (Ace Attorney, rated General Audiences, major character death, 1.2K)
• Your Shadow at Dusk (Ace Attorney, rated Explicit, noncon, 2.2K)

I have these questions for readers: What is your general impression? What could be improved? Do the smut scenes have enough energy and focus? Is the prose engaging to read?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Direct is fine, as long as you don't only list negatives.

Comments to this post will be: Unscreened.

Comments

[unspeakablehorror]

I have given concrit for "You Must Praise the Disappearing World" on AO3.

[yelp]

I have left concrit on the 5 OW and Ace Attorney stories in the "especially" list. I enjoyed them a lot, and hope my ramblings can be of some help!