Concrit for Ancslove

[ancslove]

I want to receive feedback by: A comment on this post, or on the individual works on AO3

 

Here are the works I want feedback on:  Anything on my AO3 is fair game!  archiveofourown.org/users/ancslove

 

My works' fandoms and content notes are:  I've mostly written in Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Angel, Les Miserables, Star Wars Original Trilogy and post-ROTJ Legends, Original Works, Ancient Greek Religion and Lore.  My fic can range from fluffy romance and smut, to gen angst, noncon, and dark themes.  All noncon and other dark themes are clearly tagged.

 

I have these questions for readers:  General impression?  Overall flow and pacing?  Emotional engagement and effectiveness of prose?  Does the ending feel earned, or too abrupt?  Is the smut sexy and/or emotional to you?

 

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I'd love to hear what worked for you, as well as where you think I can improve!  

 

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