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concrit_x2020-08-06 09:35 am
scansionictus) wrote in concrit_x2020-08-06 09:35 am
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I want to receive feedback by: Either by comment on my post here, Discord PM (ictus#9826), or email (nonanonamcbiba@gmail.com).
Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything I've published at my AO3. Safe fandom: Voltron: Legendary Defender. Safe work: all they do is watch us kill.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: DC Comics, Umbrella Academy (TV), Star Trek: AOS, Inception, Hannibal, Fight Club, Birds of Prey (2020). All of my fic is tagged appropriately, but in general there is canon-typical violence/disturbing themes for a lot of my fandoms (DC Comics, Hannibal, Fight Club). My Umbrella Academy fic contains sibling incest and references to drug addiction.
I have these questions for readers: I would love your general impressions on prose, characterisation (if you're not familiar with the fandom, I would like to know if it's internally consistent/if the character's motivations are clear), plot, and execution. Also whether or not I strike the balance between "too descriptive" and "too sparse" in my writing. Most of my fics are short and consist of a single scene, but for longer works with a more developed plot, I would love feedback on the pacing and whether you think the plot/character arcs were well-developed. Feedback on title, summary, tags, etc. is also welcome. These aspects are just a jumping-off point so don't feel as though you have to touch on everything, but generally speaking I would like your honest opinion on what did and did not work for you, even if it's not something I've mentioned here.
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Anywhere between a 2 and a 5 would work for me!
Thank you to everyone who gave me feedback, I'll respond in the coming days. This post is now closed for additional concrit, thank you!
Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything I've published at my AO3. Safe fandom: Voltron: Legendary Defender. Safe work: all they do is watch us kill.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: DC Comics, Umbrella Academy (TV), Star Trek: AOS, Inception, Hannibal, Fight Club, Birds of Prey (2020). All of my fic is tagged appropriately, but in general there is canon-typical violence/disturbing themes for a lot of my fandoms (DC Comics, Hannibal, Fight Club). My Umbrella Academy fic contains sibling incest and references to drug addiction.
I have these questions for readers: I would love your general impressions on prose, characterisation (if you're not familiar with the fandom, I would like to know if it's internally consistent/if the character's motivations are clear), plot, and execution. Also whether or not I strike the balance between "too descriptive" and "too sparse" in my writing. Most of my fics are short and consist of a single scene, but for longer works with a more developed plot, I would love feedback on the pacing and whether you think the plot/character arcs were well-developed. Feedback on title, summary, tags, etc. is also welcome. These aspects are just a jumping-off point so don't feel as though you have to touch on everything, but generally speaking I would like your honest opinion on what did and did not work for you, even if it's not something I've mentioned here.
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Anywhere between a 2 and a 5 would work for me!
Thank you to everyone who gave me feedback, I'll respond in the coming days. This post is now closed for additional concrit, thank you!