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concrit_x2020-08-05 09:54 pm
misspinkman) wrote in concrit_x2020-08-05 09:54 pm
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Concrit for SegaBarrett
I want to receive feedback by:
- Comment on my DW post in this community
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...): AO3. Any, though I am particularly interested in feedback on my two new 13RW fics about Bryce ("feel like you're treading water..." and "won't you allow yourself fall...")
My works' fandoms and content notes are: First fic has allusions to non-con but nothing explicit, the second includes references to non-con that are important to the story but again, not explicit
I have these questions for readers: Are these works effective? What would you like to see more/less of? Where could I improve the focus? Do the characters ring true to life?
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: 3
- Comment on my DW post in this community
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...): AO3. Any, though I am particularly interested in feedback on my two new 13RW fics about Bryce ("feel like you're treading water..." and "won't you allow yourself fall...")
My works' fandoms and content notes are: First fic has allusions to non-con but nothing explicit, the second includes references to non-con that are important to the story but again, not explicit
I have these questions for readers: Are these works effective? What would you like to see more/less of? Where could I improve the focus? Do the characters ring true to life?
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: 3