Concrit for Farla

[farla]

I want to receive feedback by: Where the work is published. I'm fine with anon comments.

Here are the works I want feedback on
Yenna, The Witcher show, 20,322 words, complete
The Sun Shines Differently, The Witcher/Dragon Age crossover, 1,113 words, one-shot series.
Encore, Castlevania show, 63,546 words, ongoing.
Sundown and the Shedding-Skin Woman, Pokemon, 3,056 words, complete.
The Point of No Return, Pokemon, 8,060 words, complete.
Another Verse, Pokemon, 80,066 words, ongoing.
The Best It Could've Gone, She-Ra, 2,488 words, complete.

Absolutely not opposed to comments on anything else, even the ancient stuff at the very back, but those are what I'm most interested in hearing about.

My works' fandoms and content notes are

Mild gore, character death, abuse.

I have these questions for readers

Largely, I'm interested in hearing whatever comes to mind - if what stands out to you is not at all what I intended, then that's on me and now I know! But specific things would be what do you think of the characters, why do you think they're doing what they're doing and does it make sense, are they right/wrong/good/evil? A number of my fics are also somewhat puzzle-y in nature and I'd like to know which, if any, clues you noticed in advance.

If a particular phrase or sentence doesn't work for you, I would appreciate a suggested rephrasing of it if one comes to mind. I find that incredibly helpful to understand where the sentence went wrong for someone.

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between

Direct is fine.