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enisy ([personal profile] enisy) wrote in [community profile] concrit_x2021-04-06 04:32 pm

Concrit for Enisy


I want to receive feedback by: Comment on this post or comment on AO3.

Here are the works I want feedback on: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Enisy Anything from 2020/2021 except: Blowing Smoke Rings in the Second Circle; But It’s the Perfect Place to Start, My Love; Makeover Day; Pretty Girls Keep One Foot on the Floor; Rider, Rider. Here is a view with old and "safe" works excluded.

I would especially appreciate feedback on any of the following:
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Available on AO3.

I have these questions for readers: What is your general impression? What could be improved? Is the prose too flowery at any point? Does the ending land properly?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Direct is fine, as long as you don't only list negatives.

Comments to this post will be: Unscreened.

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