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concrit_x2021-04-06 01:47 pm
sadisticsparkle) wrote in concrit_x2021-04-06 01:47 pm
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Concrit for sadisticsparkle
I want to receive feedback by : comments on this post or where the work is posted
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):
https://archiveofourown.org/users/sadisticsparkle/works
no safe works!
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Marvel (Steve/Tony), for the most part no warnings apply. However, a lot of my Explicit fic is dubcon or CNTW.
I have these questions for readers:
I welcome anything but I have some more specific questions:
- Is the sentences structure samey/repetitive?
- Are there any moments where the story makes a jump you don't quite follow? I've always had an issue with assuming the reader is in my head and not explaining things enough.
- How do the endings work? Are they too sudden?
- How is the paratext working: titles, summaries, tags?
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I don't mind getting blunt feedback, but I do prefer it if there's also some praise alongside it.
Comments to this post will be: screened until May 15
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):
https://archiveofourown.org/users/sadisticsparkle/works
no safe works!
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Marvel (Steve/Tony), for the most part no warnings apply. However, a lot of my Explicit fic is dubcon or CNTW.
I have these questions for readers:
I welcome anything but I have some more specific questions:
- Is the sentences structure samey/repetitive?
- Are there any moments where the story makes a jump you don't quite follow? I've always had an issue with assuming the reader is in my head and not explaining things enough.
- How do the endings work? Are they too sudden?
- How is the paratext working: titles, summaries, tags?
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I don't mind getting blunt feedback, but I do prefer it if there's also some praise alongside it.
Comments to this post will be: screened until May 15