Hi. I’m sunlit_promise, and I would be grateful for concrit on any of my works. (There’s also an index here, which has a link to a prompt fill that isn’t uploaded to the archive. Feedback is welcome for that as well.) No safe works, but I’d prefer concrit on something besides 100-word drabbles. Most of the other stuff is still fairly short, I hope that’s okay.
Currently have works in: Stand Still Stay Silent, Avatar: The Last Airbender, Ouran High School Host Club, Psycho-Pass, Death Note.
I have some concerns regarding characterization and flow & sentence structure & word choice, but I would equally like general feedback - overall impression, suggestions, which parts worked for you, which didn’t, etc. The things I write are usually intended to convey a feeling rather than a story, so I would appreciate concrit on this, too. E.g. whether a feeling was evoked, and if so, was it successful, etc.
Feedback right here would be nice, and bluntness of any level is fine. (If there is stuff that did seem to work, though, I’d be happy to know about it in addition to the stuff that could be improved. But at the same time, there’s no need to sugarcoat.) Thank you so much.
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Date: 2020-09-06 09:44 pm (UTC)Currently have works in: Stand Still Stay Silent, Avatar: The Last Airbender, Ouran High School Host Club, Psycho-Pass, Death Note.
I have some concerns regarding characterization and flow & sentence structure & word choice, but I would equally like general feedback - overall impression, suggestions, which parts worked for you, which didn’t, etc. The things I write are usually intended to convey a feeling rather than a story, so I would appreciate concrit on this, too. E.g. whether a feeling was evoked, and if so, was it successful, etc.
Feedback right here would be nice, and bluntness of any level is fine. (If there is stuff that did seem to work, though, I’d be happy to know about it in addition to the stuff that could be improved. But at the same time, there’s no need to sugarcoat.) Thank you so much.