Concrit for Ember_Keelty
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concrit_xI want to receive feedback by : Comment where the work is published (preferred) OR comment on this DW post if that's easier/more comfortable for the reviewer for whatever reason
Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything posted to my Ao3 account (Ember_Keelty) from 2017 to the present.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Lots of Dragon Age, plus various magical girl anime. Content notes and ratings vary from work to work but are listed on AO3.
I have these questions for readers:
For the fics that have original characters, or quasi-original characters like fleshed out Dragon Age PCs, I'd be particularly interested to hear readers' reactions to and thoughts and feelings about them. For both canon characters and OCs, I'm interested in whether it makes sense that they do and say the things they do, given your understanding of who they are and what's going on with them from both the fic itself and, if applicable, the canon. For fics that have action sequences, I'd be interested to hear how those flow, whether they're clear enough to follow, and whether they're engaging. For the one Utena fic, The Limitations of Wax, I'd like to hear about what kind of sense or meaning you got out of it and how you came to that conclusion. For any of my fics, I'd like feedback regarding what kind of emotional impact they have, if any: which characters you sympathize with and why, things that move you, things that leave you cold, etc. But ultimately I'm interested in hearing anything at all that stands out to you in either a good or bad way.
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I'm interested in hearing any impressions at all, good or bad, and you should feel free to be as direct as you like in either case.
Comments to this post will be: unscreened
Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything posted to my Ao3 account (Ember_Keelty) from 2017 to the present.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Lots of Dragon Age, plus various magical girl anime. Content notes and ratings vary from work to work but are listed on AO3.
I have these questions for readers:
For the fics that have original characters, or quasi-original characters like fleshed out Dragon Age PCs, I'd be particularly interested to hear readers' reactions to and thoughts and feelings about them. For both canon characters and OCs, I'm interested in whether it makes sense that they do and say the things they do, given your understanding of who they are and what's going on with them from both the fic itself and, if applicable, the canon. For fics that have action sequences, I'd be interested to hear how those flow, whether they're clear enough to follow, and whether they're engaging. For the one Utena fic, The Limitations of Wax, I'd like to hear about what kind of sense or meaning you got out of it and how you came to that conclusion. For any of my fics, I'd like feedback regarding what kind of emotional impact they have, if any: which characters you sympathize with and why, things that move you, things that leave you cold, etc. But ultimately I'm interested in hearing anything at all that stands out to you in either a good or bad way.
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I'm interested in hearing any impressions at all, good or bad, and you should feel free to be as direct as you like in either case.
Comments to this post will be: unscreened
