Thank you for all these notes! I fixed up most of these sentence/phrasing issues. I'll need to think a bit more about how the events leading up this fic played out in this Oglaf AU, though! I didn't really consider it before. Thank you for the detailed notes and reactions - they are much appreciated!
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timeasmymeasure
Re: Rite of spring
Date: 2021-05-17 08:03 pm (UTC)