Concrit for AnnabelleVeal
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concrit_xI want to receive feedback by: Comments on this post (preferred) or via email to annabelleveal2417@gmail.com
Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything posted on my AO3, with a preference for works from 2020/2021 (though if you find an earlier work you really want to give feedback on, feel free!)
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Recent works are for The Old Guard, Hannibal, Veep, Everything I Never Told You, and the Star Wars Sequel Trilogy. Ratings are T-E and relevant warnings and content notes are included in the tags and author notes of each work. The two stories marked CNTW don’t contain any archive warnings, but I would consider them to be major character death adjacent.
I have these questions for readers:
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I’m open to any style of feedback, though I do prefer that there is some mention of the things that worked well in addition to areas to improve.
Comments to this post will be: Unscreened
Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything posted on my AO3, with a preference for works from 2020/2021 (though if you find an earlier work you really want to give feedback on, feel free!)
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Recent works are for The Old Guard, Hannibal, Veep, Everything I Never Told You, and the Star Wars Sequel Trilogy. Ratings are T-E and relevant warnings and content notes are included in the tags and author notes of each work. The two stories marked CNTW don’t contain any archive warnings, but I would consider them to be major character death adjacent.
I have these questions for readers:
- Were there any points of confusion or questions you had? Any moments or details that took you out of the story?
- How is the pacing? Are there parts that drag? Parts that skip over too much or feel rushed?
- Are character motivations clear? Do character responses seem realistic and do character arcs feel complete/satisfying? If you are familiar with the canon, are the characterizations/voices in-character?
- Is the level of description appropriate? Are there places where you would like more/less description?
- General flow and language use. Did you notice too much repetition of words, phrases, and/or sentence structure? Any recurrent or particularly distracting SPAG errors?
- Any other comments, general impressions, or points of improvement
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I’m open to any style of feedback, though I do prefer that there is some mention of the things that worked well in addition to areas to improve.
Comments to this post will be: Unscreened
