Date: 2022-01-03 12:10 am (UTC)
kaiosea: image of lee sungjong from infinite (lee sungjong)
From: [personal profile] kaiosea
I'm only a year late responding, which I am sorry to be so late, but thank you so much for your thoughtful and detailed responses! I did read through your concrit when you first posted it and have been meaning to respond since then...

I'm especially glad to hear that "stranger" worked as a choice, since it was something that I debated with myself over on the best way to convey it through writing. Your suggestion for conveying voice a little more with the one line is a good one! I think I chose "funny" because XXC says that a lot in the drama (at least the subtitles I watched), but since I'm in his head, why not explore what "funny" really sounds like!

I think with "I'm sleeping now" what I was thinking was that XY was really asleep and XXC woke him up by talking, though I don't think I got that across with how sparse I made it in that section haha.

I appreciate the time you took in reading through! Thanks again!
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

Profile

Concrit Exchange

August 2022

S M T W T F S
 1 23456
78910111213
14151617181920
21222324252627
28293031   

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jun. 4th, 2025 03:35 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios