Date: 2021-05-19 06:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] eglantiere
Ohhh. It's about my third foray into OW, and it's super interesting to know what worked and what didn't. I think it was, essentially, two stories - of her loneliness and the sea/tower/birds imagery, and then of her daughter bursting back in - that could use some bridge in the middle, but I'm very pleased to know that the visuals and the overall... mood of this worked.

Thank you very much!
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