Concrit for Ember_Keelty
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concrit_xI want to receive feedback by : Comment where the work is published (AO3)
Here are the works I want feedback on:
-Any of my Dragon Age fics over the minimum wordcount. There's a variety of ratings, shipping categories, and story lengths, but it's mostly about mages, particularly Anders and mage player character OCs.
-Calling on a Friend. Undertale, Friskriel, G-rated.
-Play Hero. Undertale, Undyne-centric, T-rated for violence and death. This one is over 10k, but I would very much appreciate feedback if you're up for it!
My works' fandoms and content notes are:
Listed on AO3 where I have linked.
I have these questions for readers:
-What do you think of the characters? Do their actions and motivations make sense to you? Are they likeable, unlikeable, sympathetic, unsympathetic? Did your impressions of them change over the course of the story, and if so, what caused the changes? If something about them confuses you, what? If there was a specific moment that made you feel like you understood them better, what was it? For the fics that have original characters, or quasi-original characters like fleshed out Dragon Age PCs, I'd be particularly interested to hear your reactions to and thoughts and feelings about them.
-For fics that have action sequences, or really just any kind of description of the characters moving around and interacting with each other and their environment, how do those flow? Are they clear enough to follow? Can you picture what's going on? Do they make you feel anything in particular? Is there anything in them that confuses you or trips you up?
-Generally, what's the emotional impact of my stories? Did anything in them particularly move you? Did anything in them give you the sense it was supposed to make you feel something, but it left you cold? Why?
-Ultimately, though, I'm in interested in hearing anything at all that stands out to you in either a good or bad way.
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is:
I'm interested in hearing any impressions at all, good or bad, and you should feel free to be as direct as you like in either case.
Comments to this post will be: unscreened
Here are the works I want feedback on:
-Any of my Dragon Age fics over the minimum wordcount. There's a variety of ratings, shipping categories, and story lengths, but it's mostly about mages, particularly Anders and mage player character OCs.
-Calling on a Friend. Undertale, Friskriel, G-rated.
-Play Hero. Undertale, Undyne-centric, T-rated for violence and death. This one is over 10k, but I would very much appreciate feedback if you're up for it!
My works' fandoms and content notes are:
Listed on AO3 where I have linked.
I have these questions for readers:
-What do you think of the characters? Do their actions and motivations make sense to you? Are they likeable, unlikeable, sympathetic, unsympathetic? Did your impressions of them change over the course of the story, and if so, what caused the changes? If something about them confuses you, what? If there was a specific moment that made you feel like you understood them better, what was it? For the fics that have original characters, or quasi-original characters like fleshed out Dragon Age PCs, I'd be particularly interested to hear your reactions to and thoughts and feelings about them.
-For fics that have action sequences, or really just any kind of description of the characters moving around and interacting with each other and their environment, how do those flow? Are they clear enough to follow? Can you picture what's going on? Do they make you feel anything in particular? Is there anything in them that confuses you or trips you up?
-Generally, what's the emotional impact of my stories? Did anything in them particularly move you? Did anything in them give you the sense it was supposed to make you feel something, but it left you cold? Why?
-Ultimately, though, I'm in interested in hearing anything at all that stands out to you in either a good or bad way.
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is:
I'm interested in hearing any impressions at all, good or bad, and you should feel free to be as direct as you like in either case.
Comments to this post will be: unscreened
