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concrit_xI want to receive feedback by: Email, discord PM, and commenting on this post are all fine
scary turtle#6845
supersecretsockman@gmail.com
Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything on my AO3 from the past year except for Absolutely Quackers.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Mostly TMA. One Les Mis fic. All tagged thoroughly. All explicit, non-con. Some underage and incest.
I have these questions for readers: I am most interested in ways I can make my porn hotter. Possible questions to address that include: What strengths and weaknesses do you find in the writing? Are there parts that drag/feel rushed? Are there parts that feel empty, or like they could use more emotional or physical grounding? I notice that a lot of the fics I find hottest have a strong sense of specificity (to the canon, to the setting, and/or to the characters). Is that something I manage in my own writing? Are there certain places you think could benefit from a stronger sense of specificity? Are there trends you notice in my writing that hinder the overall story, distract you as a reader, or weaken the emotional/physical/sexual intensity of the story?
Don't feel the need to address every question, and if you have other ideas of how to approach the critique, feel free to run with those instead! I just included these in case you want something to springboard off of. The main thrust of what I am looking for more broadly is: What are the general strengths? What could I change/do better/improve on? And how can I maximize hotness?
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: 3-ish (anywhere between 2-4 would be fine)
Comments are unscreened.
scary turtle#6845
supersecretsockman@gmail.com
Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything on my AO3 from the past year except for Absolutely Quackers.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Mostly TMA. One Les Mis fic. All tagged thoroughly. All explicit, non-con. Some underage and incest.
I have these questions for readers: I am most interested in ways I can make my porn hotter. Possible questions to address that include: What strengths and weaknesses do you find in the writing? Are there parts that drag/feel rushed? Are there parts that feel empty, or like they could use more emotional or physical grounding? I notice that a lot of the fics I find hottest have a strong sense of specificity (to the canon, to the setting, and/or to the characters). Is that something I manage in my own writing? Are there certain places you think could benefit from a stronger sense of specificity? Are there trends you notice in my writing that hinder the overall story, distract you as a reader, or weaken the emotional/physical/sexual intensity of the story?
Don't feel the need to address every question, and if you have other ideas of how to approach the critique, feel free to run with those instead! I just included these in case you want something to springboard off of. The main thrust of what I am looking for more broadly is: What are the general strengths? What could I change/do better/improve on? And how can I maximize hotness?
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: 3-ish (anywhere between 2-4 would be fine)
Comments are unscreened.
