Concrit Exchange

Thank you so much for your feedback!! You have given me a lot to think about, especially in regards to how I word things - I think I do tend to get a little unwieldy sometimes and if something flows a certain way in my head then I can overdo it :D I'm really glad that you liked it overall! With referring to Chris by her last name, it was a conscious decision but a decision I no longer remember my reasoning for :P And I do need to get better about head-switching, I do think I became aware of that at one point and tried to pare it down but still ended up in too many heads. Thank you again, you are awesome!! <3