Concrit for The_Reeds_of_Enki
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concrit_xI want to receive feedback by: Fanfiction.net review
Here are the works I want feedback on : Knock on Heaven's Door
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Character Death, Disease, Violence
I have these questions for readers:
-Do events in the chapter flow well?
-Are relationship interactions believable?
-What did I do well, and what needs to be improved?
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Just tell me what's wrong or right with it. Suggestions welcome. (1)
Here are the works I want feedback on : Knock on Heaven's Door
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Character Death, Disease, Violence
I have these questions for readers:
-Do events in the chapter flow well?
-Are relationship interactions believable?
-What did I do well, and what needs to be improved?
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Just tell me what's wrong or right with it. Suggestions welcome. (1)
