Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I'll definitely keep what you've said in mind. I agree with what you said about the ending. Moving that thought earlier would have improved the emotional arc, and made the ending a little less "pat".
This was really helpful, and I appreciate everything you had to say.
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Date: 2020-08-23 10:11 pm (UTC)This was really helpful, and I appreciate everything you had to say.