Concrit for Within_a_dream
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concrit_x I want to receive feedback by: Comments on this post (comments are unscreened), Dreamwidth PMs, emails to withinadream27@gmail.com
Here are the works I want feedback on : Anything on my AO3 account.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: I've written the most for Les Mis (AMT, usually book and musical hybrid) and the Benjamin January mysteries, but I have fics for a variety of fandoms. Full list of fandoms under the cut. I have ratings from G-E, gen and all relationship types, mostly NAWA with a decent minority CNTW and some noncon and major character death.
I have these questions for readers:
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Anywhere from 3-1 is great!
Here are the works I want feedback on : Anything on my AO3 account.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: I've written the most for Les Mis (AMT, usually book and musical hybrid) and the Benjamin January mysteries, but I have fics for a variety of fandoms. Full list of fandoms under the cut. I have ratings from G-E, gen and all relationship types, mostly NAWA with a decent minority CNTW and some noncon and major character death.
Les Misérables - All Media Types (26)
Benjamin January Mysteries - Barbara Hambly (12)
Les Misérables - Victor Hugo (7)
The Adventure Zone (Podcast) (3)
The Man From U.N.C.L.E. (2015) (3)
The Queen's Thief - Megan Whalen Turner (2)
Agent Carter (TV) (2)
Graceland (TV) (2)
Stanton & Barling - E.M. Powell (2)
Whitechapel (TV) (2)
Sins of the Cities Series - K. J. Charles (2)
The Magnificent Seven (2016) (2)
Phantom 309 - Red Sovine (Song) (1)
Green Men Series - K. J. Charles (1)
The Best Ever Death Metal Band in Denton - The Mountain Goats (Song) (1)
Like Real People Do - Hozier (Song) (1)
Hamlet - Shakespeare (1)
The Alienist (TV) (1)
The Witcher (TV) (1)
X Company (TV) (1)
Chicago Med (1)
Furnace Room Lullaby - Neko Case (Song) (1)
Østenfor sol og vestenfor måne | East of the Sun and West of the Moon (1)
Miss Fisher's Murder Mysteries (1)
On the Bus Mall - The Decemberists (Song) (1)
Overlord (Movie 2018) (1)
Wolf 359 (Radio) (1)
The Bright Sessions (Podcast) (1)
Ghosted (TV 2017) (1)
Band Sinister - K. J. Charles (1)
Raven Cycle - Maggie Stiefvater (1)
The Lighthouse's Tale - Nickel Creek (Song) (1)
We Know the Devil (Visual Novel) (1)
Timeless (TV 2016) (1)
Killing Eve (TV 2018) (1)
Marvel Cinematic Universe (1)
They Can't Take That Away from Me - George Gershwin and Ira Gershwin (Song) (1)
King of the Road - Roger Miller (Song) (1)
The Daemon Lover | The House Carpenter - Anonymous (Song) (1)
Apostle (2018) (1)
Affinity - Sarah Waters (1)
Guardians of the Galaxy (Movies) (1)
Alfie (Webcomic) (1)
Much Ado About Nothing - Shakespeare (1)
The Boys Are Back in Town (to kill you) - JerryTerry (Music Video) (1)
Rivers of London - Ben Aaronovitch (1)
Wait Till Helen Comes - Mary Downing Hahn (1)
Stumptown (TV) (1)
Bosch (TV) (1)
A Charm of Magpies Series - K. J. Charles (1)
I have these questions for readers:
-Anything that strikes you would be very welcome! Do my endings feel too abrupt?
-Do my endings feel too abrupt?
-How strong are my descriptions, can you visualize what's happening?
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Anywhere from 3-1 is great!
