Concrit for Enisy

[enisy]

I want to receive feedback by: Comment on this post or comment on AO3.

Here are the works I want feedback on: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Enisy Anything from 2020/2021 except: Blowing Smoke Rings in the Second Circle; But It’s the Perfect Place to Start, My Love; Makeover Day; Pretty Girls Keep One Foot on the Floor; Rider, Rider. Here is a view with old and "safe" works excluded.

I would especially appreciate feedback on any of the following:

• Everyone Speaks Standard Here (Star Trek: DS9, 1.8K)
• Neptune in the Rhine (Ace Attorney, 5.5K)
• Motion/Stasis (Ace Attorney, rated Explicit, adopted sibling incest, 2.8K)
• Sorry I Could Not Travel Both (OW, rated Explicit, noncon, 3.4K)
• Then They Went to the Valley Below (OW, rated Explicit, noncon, 3K)
• Predilection (OW, rated Explicit, 2.2K)
• Credo (Mass Effect Original Trilogy, 1.8K)

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Available on AO3.

I have these questions for readers: What is your general impression? What could be improved? Is the prose too flowery at any point? Does the ending land properly?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Direct is fine, as long as you don't only list negatives.

Comments to this post will be: Unscreened.