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I want to receive feedback by : Comment where the work is published

Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...): Any on this list. I don't mind comments on my other fic if you're so inclined, but those are the ones I specifically want feedback on.

My works' fandoms and content notes are:

Fandoms: The Legend of Zelda, Steven Universe, Pokemon, The Amazing World of Gumball, Undertale.
Content notes: Mental illness, references to abuse, family drama, relationship drama and discussion of infidelity (The Boulevard of Broken Hearts), some graphic violence (but mostly isolated to a few scenes), character death. I believe I am pretty thorough with tagging, but please tell me if there are any tags you'd like me to add.

I have these questions for readers:

For all fics: Were the characters in-character? Did you like their characterizations?

Most of my Pokemon fic are explicitly commentaries on the way canon and fandom treat pokemon and how much agency can be ascribed to them. They are the focus of the piece and the perspectives you should consider. Please comment on what you thought of them and their behavior.

For The Gospel of Cynthia, I would appreciate a response to my author's note on the topic of religion in Pokemon. Did the fic give you any ideas or make you reevaluate your prior assumptions?

For Do No Harm, do you think the twist was fair and did it make sense?

The Darkness Between Stars is an explicit response to and criticism of canon, with many scenes being direct parallels or retellings of canon ones. What do you think of this criticism? Do you feel it is accurate or inaccurate? What do you think of the changes I made to make my AU work?

For Flawed Crystals, did I handle the characters' issues accurately and respectfully?

For Flawed Crystals, how did you treat Jasper and why? Was the climax of her arc satisfying or unsatisfying?

For Flawed Crystals, what did you think of the ending and metacommentary?

For Flawed Crystals, how was the game balance? Did you feel any of the characters were disproportionately useful or underutilized? Do you have anything to add to the developer retrospective?

For Flawed Crystals, did you fight the superboss and did you feel it provided an appropriate challenge?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Literally anything you have to say. Do not worry about hurting my feelings, I can take it.

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