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[wildboots]

REQUESTS | Getting feedback

I want to receive feedback by:
Comment where the work is published (AO3 preferred)

Here are the works I want feedback on:

Continental Divides

Fandom: Pokemon

Rating: Teen

Content warnings: rated for language, alcohol and tobacco, implied (off-screen) sex, violence, and small amounts of blood. It’s also very much a story about politics and civil unrest.

Genre tags: political intrigue, action/adventure, crime, realism, romance (enemies to lovers slow burn, though there's little more than some flirting; it's mostly literal burning right now)

Summary: “You could make a difference if you really wanted to.” Natalie and Mark quickly find themselves on opposite sides of a deadly turf war, and more than their own lives are at stake.
(OC-centric Aqua/Magma AU.)

One chapter is fine! The first few chapters are each 5k words or less.

I'm open to receiving crit on other works posted on AO3, but Divides is my preference.

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is:
Literally anything offered in good faith is great. Tell me things you liked, things you didn't, anything that confused you, what you thought of characters, etc etc.
I don't always make changes based on suggestions, but I often do! (Never not editing.)

I prefer to get feedback as comments on AO3.

Users who are already caught up:
An Author's Pen, kintsugi
(They've already given me lots of feedback and should not be assigned to me!)

Comments

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[kaiosea]

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[anonne]

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