Concrit for colorcoded
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concrit_xI want to receive feedback by:
My personal preference is comment on this post, but I'm happy with any option you prefer (email - color.coding@yahoo.com, PM, comment on AO3, etc.).
Here are the works I want feedback on:
Any of my works: https://archiveofourown.org/users/colorcoded/works/
My works' fandoms and content notes are:
Just a heads up that this account is my porn sock and so most of the works here are explicit and non-con. However, there's enough non-explicit work that you could stick entirely to that if you wanted. My main fandoms are various Disney, Soul Calibur, and some JRPGs and animanga.
Feedback questions:
Some suggestions of things to focus on:
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Blunt and brutally honest is fine, but I need some encouragement as well. For example, getting a list of 20 issues with the fic and no positivity would be discouraging for me. If there's a lot of issues with the fic, feel free to pick the most major ones to focus on - that's still useful to me. I think my fics are pretty clean SPAG-wise, but please feel free to flag issues.
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My personal preference is comment on this post, but I'm happy with any option you prefer (email - color.coding@yahoo.com, PM, comment on AO3, etc.).
Here are the works I want feedback on:
Any of my works: https://archiveofourown.org/users/colorcoded/works/
My works' fandoms and content notes are:
Just a heads up that this account is my porn sock and so most of the works here are explicit and non-con. However, there's enough non-explicit work that you could stick entirely to that if you wanted. My main fandoms are various Disney, Soul Calibur, and some JRPGs and animanga.
Feedback questions:
Some suggestions of things to focus on:
- Detail/descriptions - Does the detail/description feel too sparse, or the pacing too quick?
- Does the fic feel complete, or does the ending feel sudden or anti-climactic? Or does the fic feel like it does not express a complete "thought"? How would you change the fic to make it feel more coherent?
- Titles and summaries - are they working? Could they be improved? Did you want to click on them or were they meh? Should they focus on something else?
- For porn, is it sexy? How's the build-up? Anything throwing you out of the fic?
- General writing - Point out any issues with awkward or confusing phrasings, repetitive words or paragraphs, poor word choice, etc. Any confusions where what's going on with the character or the logic of the story is unclear?
- Any suggestions for remixing or going a different direction with the fic? Missed opportunities to do something more with the fic, etc.?
- Anything you liked, what is working in the fic, any reactions you had (positive, negative, or neutral).
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Blunt and brutally honest is fine, but I need some encouragement as well. For example, getting a list of 20 issues with the fic and no positivity would be discouraging for me. If there's a lot of issues with the fic, feel free to pick the most major ones to focus on - that's still useful to me. I think my fics are pretty clean SPAG-wise, but please feel free to flag issues.
Comments to this post will be:
Unscreened
