concrit for Slyboots/tachocracy
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concrit_x I want to receive feedback by : Email (slybootsslick@gmail.com) or comments on this post.
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):
https://archiveofourown.org/works/28496961 (Transformers Prime, 8k)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/29414688 (Transformers Prime, <1k)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/29882895/chapters/73538595 (Transformers IDW/Prime fusion, WIP, ~9k at this time)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/24550762 (Transformers Prime, 3k)
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Transformers Prime, character death, graphic violence
I have these questions for readers: How strong is the description/narrative voice? How distinct are the characters from each other (and if you're familiar with the fandom, how far off are the characters from their canon selves)? How's the pacing? What threw you off? Is the prose samey?
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I'm interested in any feedback at all, good and bad. Please be gentle (without sugarcoating). I would rather not get SPAG critique.
Comments to this post will be: Unscreened.
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):
https://archiveofourown.org/works/28496961 (Transformers Prime, 8k)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/29414688 (Transformers Prime, <1k)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/29882895/chapters/73538595 (Transformers IDW/Prime fusion, WIP, ~9k at this time)
https://archiveofourown.org/works/24550762 (Transformers Prime, 3k)
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Transformers Prime, character death, graphic violence
I have these questions for readers: How strong is the description/narrative voice? How distinct are the characters from each other (and if you're familiar with the fandom, how far off are the characters from their canon selves)? How's the pacing? What threw you off? Is the prose samey?
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I'm interested in any feedback at all, good and bad. Please be gentle (without sugarcoating). I would rather not get SPAG critique.
Comments to this post will be: Unscreened.
