Concrit for sheeon
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concrit_xI want to receive feedback by: Comments on this post.
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...): Any of my works on AO3 except for Nobody Else. I'd especially love to receive feedback on An Unexpected Alliance (Original Work, explicit, 3.5k) but feedback on any of my works would be great.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Mostly Marvel and Original Work with a few other fandoms. Many of my works are explicit and some deal with consent issues. I have a variety of shorter works as well.
I have these questions for readers: What works for you in my stories and what doesn't? Are there any obvious weak spots I need to work on? Thoughts on characterization? Do the emotions land for you? Any thoughts on prose? I'm also happy to get feedback on titles, summaries, and tags. Really, anything that comes up as something you want to mention is welcomed as feedback!
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Anything goes for me, from focus on technical SPAG issues to general impressions on what you thought about a work. I'm fine with direct feedback, but it would be nice to hear what you liked alongside the flaws, and that the feedback has some specific direction on what ways I can improve if something is not working for you.
Comments to this post will be: Screened.
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...): Any of my works on AO3 except for Nobody Else. I'd especially love to receive feedback on An Unexpected Alliance (Original Work, explicit, 3.5k) but feedback on any of my works would be great.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Mostly Marvel and Original Work with a few other fandoms. Many of my works are explicit and some deal with consent issues. I have a variety of shorter works as well.
I have these questions for readers: What works for you in my stories and what doesn't? Are there any obvious weak spots I need to work on? Thoughts on characterization? Do the emotions land for you? Any thoughts on prose? I'm also happy to get feedback on titles, summaries, and tags. Really, anything that comes up as something you want to mention is welcomed as feedback!
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Anything goes for me, from focus on technical SPAG issues to general impressions on what you thought about a work. I'm fine with direct feedback, but it would be nice to hear what you liked alongside the flaws, and that the feedback has some specific direction on what ways I can improve if something is not working for you.
Comments to this post will be: Screened.
