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Concrit for Soryenn
Jun. 27th, 2022 10:39 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
soryennI want to receive feedback by : Email, Discord PM, Comment on my DW post in this community
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...): Anything on this list!
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Fandoms are Gundam Wing (5), YuGiOh!DM (3), X/1999 (1), Simoun (1), Rogue One (3), A Song of Ice and Fire (1), Monkey Island (1) and Original Work (1).
All works rated G or T. Pairings are M/M, F/F, M/M/M and M/M/F.
I have these questions for readers:
- How is the characterization? Do the characters feel likable? Can you relate to their emotions, and in general, are the emotions well conveyed or not?
- Are my in medias res beginnings working? How can I make the endings better?
- Can you follow what’s going on in action scenes? Is my general lack of descriptions an issue?
- Are there parts that left you confused? I usually leave a lot unsaid to leave room for interpretation, but do I leave too much unsaid?
- How can I make better summaries? I also have issues choosing tags, so any help with that would be appreciated.
- And/or anything else you want to point out and that I'm not thinking of!
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is:
- Direct and geared towards improvement would be best: tell me what works and how I can do better for what doesn’t.
- A note on SPAG: I’m ESL. Please tell me if there are misused punctuation, awkward sentences, words I’ve mistaken for others, etc. (especially for repeating mistakes), I'd really appreciate it. If you want to do only SPAG concrit, I’ll be super fine with that as well. (Except for All Three of Our Hearts and Cherry Blossoms and Camellias which have been SPAG-checked by a native speaker already)
Comments to this post will be: Unscreened
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...): Anything on this list!
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Fandoms are Gundam Wing (5), YuGiOh!DM (3), X/1999 (1), Simoun (1), Rogue One (3), A Song of Ice and Fire (1), Monkey Island (1) and Original Work (1).
All works rated G or T. Pairings are M/M, F/F, M/M/M and M/M/F.
I have these questions for readers:
- How is the characterization? Do the characters feel likable? Can you relate to their emotions, and in general, are the emotions well conveyed or not?
- Are my in medias res beginnings working? How can I make the endings better?
- Can you follow what’s going on in action scenes? Is my general lack of descriptions an issue?
- Are there parts that left you confused? I usually leave a lot unsaid to leave room for interpretation, but do I leave too much unsaid?
- How can I make better summaries? I also have issues choosing tags, so any help with that would be appreciated.
- And/or anything else you want to point out and that I'm not thinking of!
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is:
- Direct and geared towards improvement would be best: tell me what works and how I can do better for what doesn’t.
- A note on SPAG: I’m ESL. Please tell me if there are misused punctuation, awkward sentences, words I’ve mistaken for others, etc. (especially for repeating mistakes), I'd really appreciate it. If you want to do only SPAG concrit, I’ll be super fine with that as well. (Except for All Three of Our Hearts and Cherry Blossoms and Camellias which have been SPAG-checked by a native speaker already)
Comments to this post will be: Unscreened
