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[adriennefae]

I want to receive feedback by : Email or comment on my post in this community

Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):
Any of the works on this filtered list.

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Mostly Star Trek Discovery and The Expanse, though there are a couple of other things in the mix too. They range from 1k to 5.5k in terms of word count. Everything on the filtered list is F/F. Most of it is rated T, but there are a couple of M-rated stories too. They're all either No Warnings Apply or CNTW, with the latter usually meaning the story deals with either temporary or canonical character death. A lot of the fics deal with subject matter like trauma, grief, etc.

I have these questions for readers:
-If you know the fandom, do the characters seem IC? Whether you know the characters or not, do you feel like they are internally consistent within the story and that you get a good sense of who they are?
-Is the main relationship believable to you? Do the characters' attraction to/feelings about each other come across well? Do the characters' emotions come across well in general?
-Do you feel there is a good balance of description to dialogue to inner monologue/introspection to narration?
-Does the dialogue flow well? Does the story flow well in general?
-Do any parts not make sense?
-Does the beginning draw you in? Does the ending work for you?
-Is there anything else you particularly liked or disliked?
-Feedback on tags/titles/summaries also welcome.

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I'd like to hear both things you liked and things you didn't. Feel free to be direct.

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