concrit_x | Concrit for sadisticsparkle

I want to receive feedback by : whatever method you prefer, including comments here and on the works themselves

Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):

Any +1K fic posted from May 2021 on. FE:3H fic can be found here: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Shipwreck_Mary/works

My works' fandoms and content notes are: F/F, F/M, M/M, gen. All ratings. Fandoms are mostly Steve/Tony in several universes with some Fire Emblem 3H het and Star Trek Discovery fic. Then Dragon Age, Violet Evergarden, Spiritfarer, Saint Seiya, Love Nikki and Taylor Swift songs.

A lot of my Explicit fic is dubcon or CNTW.

I have these questions for readers:

I'm not expecting answers to all of these! Just some pointers.

General questions:
- Are there any moments where the story makes a jump you don't quite follow? I've always had an issue with assuming the reader is in my head and not explaining things enough.
- How do the endings work? Are they too sudden? Does the tension deflate?
- How is the paratext working: titles, summaries, tags? Is it accurate?
- Are the narrative voices in different fics distinctive?
- How are the metaphors and similes working? Too elaborate? Too trite? if they're working, how or why?

For explicit fics:
- How is the writing of the physical sensations? The sensuality, I guess
- How is the description of the orgasms working? Is it climax-y enough?

For fic with weird structure like Stored Dreams, Flowing Through the Dreams of Time, and Hometown Skeptics (the TS one):
- Is it ever TOO confusing?
- How does the mixed media elements work in Hometown Skeptics?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I don't mind getting blunt feedback, but I do prefer it if there's also some praise alongside it.

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