Concrit for Luzula

[luzula]

Here are the works I want feedback on: Choose a fic from my AO3 account. I would prefer something from approximately the last seven years (if you critique something from my first years of writing it probably won't be very useful to me now). Most of my works are in due South, but I'm no longer actively in that fandom and I would prefer you to choose something else. The most useful to me would be if you chose something from my current fandom (Flight of the Heron) or related 18th century fics, but I understand that it's a tiny fandom, so you don't have to!

My works' fandoms and content notes are: See AO3 link above.

I have these questions for readers: Oh, hmm. I would like feedback on all aspects of the fic: style and language, plot, characterization, setting, structure. I don't have more specific questions--I just want to hear about things you thought of that I haven't myself! And you don't have to include every aspect; it's okay to focus on the aspects of writing which you feel are your own strengths to give feedback on.

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: You can be blunt if you want, but please do include positive as well as negative feedback.

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