Concrit for horchata
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concrit_x[Request for horchata, posted by mod]
I want to receive feedback by:
-Email
-Discord PM
-Via a Google doc I can provide to you!
Here are the works I want feedback on:
I'd love to receive feedback on anything written from 2015 on. My AO3 is here, horchata.
Fandoms and content notes:
All my works after 2015 are written in these fandoms: Haikyuu!, Mob Psycho 100, Free, The Witcher, The Murderbot Diaries. I also have some Yuletide pieces.
Feedback questions:
Do any of these pieces feel precious in ways they didn't earn? Were the emotional beats effective? Do any of them feel overworked/sculpted rather than natural? Are the voices of characters authentic to the piece and the fandom? And, in general, what do you think are their strengths and areas for growth? How can I improve?
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is:
I like knowing what I did well and what I can improve upon. I actually don't receive a lot of critique on my work regularly, so this will be a lovely and new experience for me. I'd love to hear your impressions as you read, what felt emotionally impactful and what didn't; what worked and what fell flat. I would like you to be honest and kind (no need to sugar-coat, but no need to add needles to a salad to see the color I bleed).
Comments to this post will be:
-screened until July 31
I want to receive feedback by:
-Discord PM
-Via a Google doc I can provide to you!
Here are the works I want feedback on:
I'd love to receive feedback on anything written from 2015 on. My AO3 is here, horchata.
Fandoms and content notes:
All my works after 2015 are written in these fandoms: Haikyuu!, Mob Psycho 100, Free, The Witcher, The Murderbot Diaries. I also have some Yuletide pieces.
Feedback questions:
Do any of these pieces feel precious in ways they didn't earn? Were the emotional beats effective? Do any of them feel overworked/sculpted rather than natural? Are the voices of characters authentic to the piece and the fandom? And, in general, what do you think are their strengths and areas for growth? How can I improve?
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is:
I like knowing what I did well and what I can improve upon. I actually don't receive a lot of critique on my work regularly, so this will be a lovely and new experience for me. I'd love to hear your impressions as you read, what felt emotionally impactful and what didn't; what worked and what fell flat. I would like you to be honest and kind (no need to sugar-coat, but no need to add needles to a salad to see the color I bleed).
Comments to this post will be:
-screened until July 31
