concrit_x | Concrit for Imperial

I want to receive feedback by:
-Comment on my DW post in this community
-Email imperialdragonreader at gmail.com
-Comment where the work is published (AO3)

Here are the works I want feedback on : anything on AO3 (or a WIP not yet published which I would post here, if that suits a prospective critter better)

My works' fandoms and content notes are: I write Original Works only. One set is part of a shared modern AU ancient Roman universe (2770 auc), the other is a science fantasy story with tangential references to our world but mostly wrapped up in its own universe and not abandoned despite the updates being slow (Kin and Kind). Only one story is complete by itself (Roman AU but not part of a continuing narrative): Retail https://archiveofourown.org/works/17619455. All my works are slavefic. There is some sex but not as much as I hoped, and the kink is pretty minimal. There is reference to noncon, underage and the bad things that sexual slavery implies, and the fics are well tagged.

I have these questions for readers: Your spontaneous impressions. Mainly on flow, concentration on POV detail, characterisation, emotion (and everything) concisely delivered, world building believable, not too info-dumped, and enough shown to be intriguing but not too confusing.Also dialogue, clarity of action and whether my prose is clunky. I am aware that my plots/stories are not necessarily compelling and any advice valued, but this is not my focus. Please comment on anything that occurs to you.

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Probably in between but maybe 3-2? I value directness and try to do that myself without being harsh.

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