Concrit for Masu_Trout
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concrit_xI want to receive feedback by: Comment on my post in this community.
Here are the works I want feedback on:
https://archiveofourown.org/users/Masu_Trout/works
I am interested on concrit for anything published within the past year.
My works' fandoms and content notes are:
A variety of fandoms, mostly video games - in particular there's a lot of Deus Ex and Vampyr there. All potential content warnings should be tagged on AO3, I believe.
I have these questions for readers:
1.) Is the description in my works natural-feeling? I always wonder how it sounds, especially in terms of whether there's enough physical description to make the characters feel like they're in a real space as opposed to a featureless void. (Or, on the other hand, whether the description drags on in places, or gets too into a character's thoughts and makes things feel boring.)
2.) Are the interactions between characters natural-sounding, and is there places where they might seem odd or boring, or fail to keep your interest? Do their interactions convey the kind of emotions I'm trying to get across?
3.) If the readers are familiar with my fandoms, I'd love notes on IC-ness.
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: I am most interested in (1), the direct feedback, but am also fine with in-the-middle levels of directness.
Here are the works I want feedback on:
https://archiveofourown.org/users/Masu_Trout/works
I am interested on concrit for anything published within the past year.
My works' fandoms and content notes are:
A variety of fandoms, mostly video games - in particular there's a lot of Deus Ex and Vampyr there. All potential content warnings should be tagged on AO3, I believe.
I have these questions for readers:
1.) Is the description in my works natural-feeling? I always wonder how it sounds, especially in terms of whether there's enough physical description to make the characters feel like they're in a real space as opposed to a featureless void. (Or, on the other hand, whether the description drags on in places, or gets too into a character's thoughts and makes things feel boring.)
2.) Are the interactions between characters natural-sounding, and is there places where they might seem odd or boring, or fail to keep your interest? Do their interactions convey the kind of emotions I'm trying to get across?
3.) If the readers are familiar with my fandoms, I'd love notes on IC-ness.
I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: I am most interested in (1), the direct feedback, but am also fine with in-the-middle levels of directness.
