Hi! Sorry for the very late reply. :) Thank you so much for this.
Good to know the paratext worked. I'm always very anxious about my summaries. Sometimes I worry my Tony(s) voices are too much, so good to know that worked too!
It can be hard to keep gangbangs from getting samey, and you definitely avoided that stumbling block here.
I love fandom and how this can be very thoughtful feedback.
I'll keep that about ellipses and em-dashes in mind, because on re-reading, yeah, it's too much.
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Date: 2021-05-19 06:28 am (UTC)Good to know the paratext worked. I'm always very anxious about my summaries. Sometimes I worry my Tony(s) voices are too much, so good to know that worked too!
It can be hard to keep gangbangs from getting samey, and you definitely avoided that stumbling block here.
I love fandom and how this can be very thoughtful feedback.
I'll keep that about ellipses and em-dashes in mind, because on re-reading, yeah, it's too much.