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concrit_xI want to receive feedback by : comments on this post or where the work is posted
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https://archiveofourown.org/users/sadisticsparkle/works
no safe works!
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Marvel (Steve/Tony), for the most part no warnings apply. However, a lot of my Explicit fic is dubcon or CNTW.
I have these questions for readers:
I welcome anything but I have some more specific questions:
- Is the sentences structure samey/repetitive?
- Are there any moments where the story makes a jump you don't quite follow? I've always had an issue with assuming the reader is in my head and not explaining things enough.
- How do the endings work? Are they too sudden?
- How is the paratext working: titles, summaries, tags?
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I don't mind getting blunt feedback, but I do prefer it if there's also some praise alongside it.
Comments to this post will be: screened until May 15
Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):
https://archiveofourown.org/users/sadisticsparkle/works
no safe works!
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Marvel (Steve/Tony), for the most part no warnings apply. However, a lot of my Explicit fic is dubcon or CNTW.
I have these questions for readers:
I welcome anything but I have some more specific questions:
- Is the sentences structure samey/repetitive?
- Are there any moments where the story makes a jump you don't quite follow? I've always had an issue with assuming the reader is in my head and not explaining things enough.
- How do the endings work? Are they too sudden?
- How is the paratext working: titles, summaries, tags?
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I don't mind getting blunt feedback, but I do prefer it if there's also some praise alongside it.
Comments to this post will be: screened until May 15
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Date: 2021-05-19 06:28 am (UTC)Good to know the paratext worked. I'm always very anxious about my summaries. Sometimes I worry my Tony(s) voices are too much, so good to know that worked too!
It can be hard to keep gangbangs from getting samey, and you definitely avoided that stumbling block here.
I love fandom and how this can be very thoughtful feedback.
I'll keep that about ellipses and em-dashes in mind, because on re-reading, yeah, it's too much.