Concrit for sadisticsparkle

[sadisticsparkle]

I want to receive feedback by : comments on this post or where the work is posted

Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):

https://archiveofourown.org/users/sadisticsparkle/works

no safe works!

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Marvel (Steve/Tony), for the most part no warnings apply. However, a lot of my Explicit fic is dubcon or CNTW.

I have these questions for readers:

I welcome anything but I have some more specific questions:

- Is the sentences structure samey/repetitive?
- Are there any moments where the story makes a jump you don't quite follow? I've always had an issue with assuming the reader is in my head and not explaining things enough.
- How do the endings work? Are they too sudden?
- How is the paratext working: titles, summaries, tags?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I don't mind getting blunt feedback, but I do prefer it if there's also some praise alongside it.

Comments to this post will be: screened until May 15

Comments

[misspinkman]

Hello! I left feedback on Across a Crowded Room, You Better Check Yourself, and I Ask If You're Still There!

[sadisticsparkle]

Oh, wow, thanks! It's been a week so I haven't had the time to read your comments yet, but I really look forward to it. :)