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Concrit for Filigranka
Apr. 15th, 2021 01:42 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
filigrankaI want to receive feedback by :
- Comment on my DW post in this community
- Comment where the work is published (AO3)
- tumblr message (I’m Filigranka there) or on Discord (Filigranka#6634)
- if you know me on other fandom platform/mail, and prefer to reach me there, it’s fine.
Here are the works I want feedback on: Everything on my AO3 is a fair game.
https://archiveofourown.org/users/Filigranka - I have no safe works, feel free to comment on anything, drabbles, WIPs, one-shots, multichaptered fics... I write in Polish&English, and if you happen to know the first - or are brave enough to use online translators to read fics ;) - feedback about Polish works is welcome, too.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: I've written for dozens of fandom, in English and Polish, so probably using my Ao3's dashboard is the best way to check them all. The ones I have written the most for in English are The Witcher (games and books), Compilation of FFVII, Star Wars, especially sequel trilogy, Harry Potter, Silmarillion.
I write everything, from crack to dark, from gen to noncon porn with pretty kinky stuff, with a side of worldbuilding and politics in everything. These things are properly tagged and warned for on AO3.
Too long sentences aren't tagged, but believe me, there's plenty of them. ;)
I have these questions for readers: Any kind of feedback will be appreciated, but a general “SPAG mistakes” alone wouldn’t help me much, without explanation of a specific SPAG problem.
Any feedback about using descriptions (more. I know I need more, but how and where?) would be very appreciated. I struggle with summaries and tags a lot and will gladly take any advice about them.
I love all comments, including the ones focused on more formal side or focusing on the inter-workings or just a one sentence, so if you feel like going all nitpicky, don't restrain yourself. But I will just as happily read (and if my personal issues won't stop me, reply to) any interpretations, views of the characters and their relationships, digressions and discussions about worldbuilding, charactes or canon. Or your stream-of-consciousness-like impression about the fic.
Also, I can make a long list of the things I do wrong, but I have no idea what, if anything, I do right, so if there's something in my writing which can be commented upon positively - on a more general level, like "I like the % of the adjectives to verbs" or a specific one, like "having three verbs and one adjective in this sentence works as an emphasis of Y" (this is the most detached from real content of the fics exemple I could make ;)) - it'll probably help me, too.
Side-note: I love drabbles, getting a con-crit-treat on them would be just as awesome as critique on longer works.
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Anything goes.
Comments to this post will be: unscreened.
- Comment on my DW post in this community
- Comment where the work is published (AO3)
- tumblr message (I’m Filigranka there) or on Discord (Filigranka#6634)
- if you know me on other fandom platform/mail, and prefer to reach me there, it’s fine.
Here are the works I want feedback on: Everything on my AO3 is a fair game.
https://archiveofourown.org/users/Filigranka - I have no safe works, feel free to comment on anything, drabbles, WIPs, one-shots, multichaptered fics... I write in Polish&English, and if you happen to know the first - or are brave enough to use online translators to read fics ;) - feedback about Polish works is welcome, too.
My works' fandoms and content notes are: I've written for dozens of fandom, in English and Polish, so probably using my Ao3's dashboard is the best way to check them all. The ones I have written the most for in English are The Witcher (games and books), Compilation of FFVII, Star Wars, especially sequel trilogy, Harry Potter, Silmarillion.
I write everything, from crack to dark, from gen to noncon porn with pretty kinky stuff, with a side of worldbuilding and politics in everything. These things are properly tagged and warned for on AO3.
Too long sentences aren't tagged, but believe me, there's plenty of them. ;)
I have these questions for readers: Any kind of feedback will be appreciated, but a general “SPAG mistakes” alone wouldn’t help me much, without explanation of a specific SPAG problem.
Any feedback about using descriptions (more. I know I need more, but how and where?) would be very appreciated. I struggle with summaries and tags a lot and will gladly take any advice about them.
I love all comments, including the ones focused on more formal side or focusing on the inter-workings or just a one sentence, so if you feel like going all nitpicky, don't restrain yourself. But I will just as happily read (and if my personal issues won't stop me, reply to) any interpretations, views of the characters and their relationships, digressions and discussions about worldbuilding, charactes or canon. Or your stream-of-consciousness-like impression about the fic.
Also, I can make a long list of the things I do wrong, but I have no idea what, if anything, I do right, so if there's something in my writing which can be commented upon positively - on a more general level, like "I like the % of the adjectives to verbs" or a specific one, like "having three verbs and one adjective in this sentence works as an emphasis of Y" (this is the most detached from real content of the fics exemple I could make ;)) - it'll probably help me, too.
Side-note: I love drabbles, getting a con-crit-treat on them would be just as awesome as critique on longer works.
The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Anything goes.
Comments to this post will be: unscreened.
