Concrit for sheeon

[sheeon]

I want to receive feedback by: Comments on this post.

Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...): Any of my works on AO3 except for Nobody Else. I'd especially love to receive feedback on An Unexpected Alliance (Original Work, explicit, 3.5k) but feedback on any of my works would be great.

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Mostly Marvel and Original Work with a few other fandoms. Many of my works are explicit and some deal with consent issues. I have a variety of shorter works as well.

I have these questions for readers: What works for you in my stories and what doesn't? Are there any obvious weak spots I need to work on? Thoughts on characterization? Do the emotions land for you? Any thoughts on prose? I'm also happy to get feedback on titles, summaries, and tags. Really, anything that comes up as something you want to mention is welcomed as feedback!

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Anything goes for me, from focus on technical SPAG issues to general impressions on what you thought about a work. I'm fine with direct feedback, but it would be nice to hear what you liked alongside the flaws, and that the feedback has some specific direction on what ways I can improve if something is not working for you.

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Concrit for pendrecarc

[pendrecarc]

I want to receive feedback by: DW comment

Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):

Complete works posted on AO3 after mid-2014. Filtered link here. For AO3 works, I'd prefer to get concrit here. Safe stories to exclude: Six Seeds; Red Sky at Morning; The Fine Print

If you've got loads of time and want to read a novel-length WIP, I'm working on a Regency f/f romance featuring identity porn, crossdressing, and marriage of convenience here: linneacarls. Feedback can go straight in the comments there.

My works' fandoms and content notes are:

The Queen's Thief; Jane Austen; Magnus Archives; Original Works; Rivers of London; a variety of smaller fandoms. Stories on AO3 are generally tagged or have notes for anything canon-atypical. The original WIP contains references to two instances of sexual violence, both of which occur before the story, neither of which was committed against the POV character.

I have these questions for readers:

I love writing pastiche and changing up my style based on the fandom and type of story. Would appreciate notes on how the chosen voice, POV, and style does or doesn't work. For example, in Rivers of London, I've written three stories with three different POVs, and I tried to make them all very specific to the chosen character. I'd love to hear ways in which that served, or failed to serve, any individual story.

I'd also love comments on pacing, characterization, and clarity of plot. For exchange stories, I'm often trying to convey a sense of larger events/context in a limited number of words and would like to know if that is or isn't successful. For the novel-length WIP, a sense of when it gets bogged down or repetitive, or when something needs more time. I love wordsmithing, so detailed feedback on phrasing, sentence and paragraph structure, rhythm, etc. is welcome. (It's possibly less useful for the novel-length WIP, which is completely unedited, but I'm open to it.)

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Anything from gentle to extremely critical feedback is fine!

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Concrit for Kaiosea

[kaiosea]

I want to receive feedback by any of these:
-Comment on my DW post in this community
-Comment where the work is published on AO3 - if you do this, please mention in the comment that you are doing it for concrit-x so that I know
-Email (kaioseas at gmail dot com) Note the extra s at the end, haha.

Here are the works I want feedback on (and my safe works are...):
I would love feedback on my more recent fics (except safe works), especially what I posted from 2017-present. Some of the fandoms I've written for overall are: 
World Trigger (Anime & Manga): Play Rough, Play Nice; Humming; and you still followed me away; Golden Spiral
BNHA: Darker Strains of Mercy (wip)
The Untamed: if you’re gonna get me addicted (you have my permission) 
Daiya no A: hot air always rises; Monster Rookie
Hana no Mizo Shiru | Only the Flower Knows: Sun-awaiting
Ping Pong the Animation: love the second glances
Ajin: Passion Grip 
Durarara!!
Haikyuu
Attack on Titan

I’ve written for many other random fandoms as well: Here’s a link to my AO3 profile without any filtering.
However, if there’s a ship, fandom, or particular tag that you’re familiar with/particularly excited about reading and the fic is older than 2017, feel free to go for that. Anything except my safe works is fair game.
My safe works are (no feedback please!): Cold Eyes, I seek the veins beneath your skin, Forwards or Better, Crossing Borders.
Here’s a link to my fics with the “safe” ones filtered out.


My works' fandoms and content notes are:
I’ve written a variety of things, including a lot of porn. My works generally have content tags. There are a couple fics that are tagged cntw along with other tags. If you have a question about anything content-related before reading, I’m happy to answer.

I have these questions for readers:
(Please don’t feel like you have to answer all of these, but I’m interested in your thoughts on any of them.)

• What did you think/feel about the summary and title before you read the fic? Did this change after having read the fic?
• I’m interested in your emotional reactions as you read the fic. What surprised you? What worked for you or what didn’t?
• How clear was the plot, or the characters’ motivations, or the physicality of what was happening?
• What sense of writing style did you get? I feel like my style is very different from fic to fic since I try to change it to fit the canon or story, so I am always interested in how it comes off.
• If you know the canon, how do you feel like it relates to canon? If you don’t know the canon, what are your impressions of the characters just from my fic?
• What did you think of the dialogue/prose?
• Anything else that you felt while reading?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is:
I’m interested in your honest impressions, whether they’re good or bad. However, I wouldn’t like to receive just harsh criticism. If you want to focus on areas of improvement, that’s great for me, but please let me know what you enjoyed as well. 

I’m not interested in SPAG feedback. (That said, if you notice a typo, I would not be offended if you pointed it out *sweatdrop*)

Overall, I would also love if you could be as specific as you can. If something worked for you or didn’t work for you, what specific elements in the fic contributed to forming that impression?

Quoting lines or passages is something I also would find helpful.

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Concrit for Luzula

[luzula]

I want to receive feedback by : email (luzula at fripost dot org) or comment on this post.

Here are the works I want feedback on: Here are my works. It would be most useful to me to get feedback on more recent works, say, within the last six years. But if you really want to do one of my older works, you can. What I would like most is to get feedback on my Flight of the Heron writing, but most of what I've done there is longfics, and I understand if you don't have the time for that! If you want, you could read the first 10,000 words or so of If Fate Should Reverse Our Positions. Or if you want something short and self-contained, you could do A Last Taste of Life. It's a different but tangentially related fandom, with a similar style. But if there's something else I've written which is in fandom you're in, or that you otherwise feel attracted to reading, do go with that.

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Most of my older work is in due South, but otherwise I mostly write in rarelit fandoms, currently the 18th century historical fandom Flight of the Heron. But in the last six years I've also written Star Wars, The Dark is Rising, Earthsea, Temeraire, etc. For content notes, check the fics, but I don't think I have any that apply to so many of my fics that they're worth mentioning. I write the full spectrum from porn to gen.

I have these questions for readers: Well, mostly I want to know things I didn't know to ask about! Like, if I knew it was an issue I suppose I would have worked more on it...but anyway, I'd love to get feedback about any aspects of style/plot/structure/characterization/setting.

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: A mix of positive and negative aspects is most useful to me.

Comments to this post will be: unscreened