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[personal profile] farla
I want to receive feedback by: Where the work is published. I'm fine with anon comments.

Here are the works I want feedback on
Yenna, The Witcher show, 20,322 words, complete
The Sun Shines Differently, The Witcher/Dragon Age crossover, 1,113 words, one-shot series.
Encore, Castlevania show, 63,546 words, ongoing.
Sundown and the Shedding-Skin Woman, Pokemon, 3,056 words, complete.
The Point of No Return, Pokemon, 8,060 words, complete.
Another Verse, Pokemon, 80,066 words, ongoing.
The Best It Could've Gone, She-Ra, 2,488 words, complete.

Absolutely not opposed to comments on anything else, even the ancient stuff at the very back, but those are what I'm most interested in hearing about.

My works' fandoms and content notes are

Mild gore, character death, abuse.

I have these questions for readers

Largely, I'm interested in hearing whatever comes to mind - if what stands out to you is not at all what I intended, then that's on me and now I know! But specific things would be what do you think of the characters, why do you think they're doing what they're doing and does it make sense, are they right/wrong/good/evil? A number of my fics are also somewhat puzzle-y in nature and I'd like to know which, if any, clues you noticed in advance.

If a particular phrase or sentence doesn't work for you, I would appreciate a suggested rephrasing of it if one comes to mind. I find that incredibly helpful to understand where the sentence went wrong for someone.

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between

Direct is fine.
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[personal profile] imperial_dragon
I want to receive feedback by:
-Comment on my DW post in this community
-Email imperialdragonreader at gmail.com
-Comment where the work is published (AO3)

Here are the works I want feedback on : anything on AO3 (or a WIP not yet published which I would post here, if that suits a prospective critter better)

My works' fandoms and content notes are: I write Original Works only. One set is part of a shared modern AU ancient Roman universe (2770 auc), the other is a science fantasy story with tangential references to our world but mostly wrapped up in its own universe and not abandoned despite the updates being slow (Kin and Kind). Only one story is complete by itself (Roman AU but not part of a continuing narrative): Retail https://archiveofourown.org/works/17619455. All my works are slavefic. There is some sex but not as much as I hoped, and the kink is pretty minimal. There is reference to noncon, underage and the bad things that sexual slavery implies, and the fics are well tagged.

I have these questions for readers: Your spontaneous impressions. Mainly on flow, concentration on POV detail, characterisation, emotion (and everything) concisely delivered, world building believable, not too info-dumped, and enough shown to be intriguing but not too confusing.Also dialogue, clarity of action and whether my prose is clunky. I am aware that my plots/stories are not necessarily compelling and any advice valued, but this is not my focus. Please comment on anything that occurs to you.

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Probably in between but maybe 3-2? I value directness and try to do that myself without being harsh.

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[personal profile] skara

I want to receive feedback by: comment on this post, on the fic itself, or send an email to: to at skara.casa (yes, the first half of my email is that short ;D)

Here are the works I want feedback on: Any of the works posted under [archiveofourown.org profile] skaralding are fair game. I am particularly interested in getting feedback on: Figurine, in Reality (HP, 5k), The Return of ANBU Weasel (Naruto, 5k), Unravelling Aymeric (FFXIV, 9k) and bloom (Naruto, 29k)

Work fandoms and content notes: The fandoms I write in are mainly Original Work, Naruto, FFXIV and Harry Potter. I tag my fics pretty thoroughly; incest, rape, underage, graphic violence and character death are my most frequently used warnings. If you want an extra heads up before diving into any of my fics, let me know.

I have these questions for readers: [Questions for specific works] )

[Questions for all my fics in general] )

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: 3 please :D

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[personal profile] nonexistentwench
I want to receive feedback by: Comment on my DW post in this community, ideally. If for any reason you don't feel comfortable doing it publicly my Discord handle is SaltWife98#6608

Here are the works I want feedback on: https://archiveofourown.org/users/amitye/works my safe works would be the Inheritance Cycle fics, the second chapter of "You don't know what love is" and "love can tell a million stories".

My works' fandoms and content notes are: It's all tagged, tell me if you have any questions! The fandoms are Romeo and Juliet, War and Peace/Natasha Pierre and the Great Comet of 1812,Six of Crows and Carrie

I have these questions for readers: (highly optional, I'm perfectly fine with your spontaneous impression) Is there anything that would make you close the fic without finishing? Does the dialogue flow well? Does the pacing work? If you choose to comment on a longer (10k+) work, would this be better if it was shorter and do you have any advice on how to avoid this sort of word count bloating?

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: mhh maybe around a 2-3? As long as you aren't straight up insulting I'm good with everything
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[personal profile] cordialcount
I want to receive feedback by: Comment to AO3, comment to this post, email (onetwofourandthree at hotmail), or Discord (cordial#5530) are all fine

Here are the works I want feedback on: [archiveofourown.org profile] cordialcount, 2016 or later, please

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Utena, Yuri on Ice, Loveless, Hiveswap, Hannibal, The Handmaiden
If we don't share any fandoms, I think rise intact relies the least on canon knowledge (but choose something else if you prefer!).

Content notes )

I have these questions for readers: I appreciate both reactions to specific elements/lines and broader comments about effectiveness/impact, tone, style, characterization, recurring issues, etc.

I think I especially struggle with
- Dialogue: Did it sound like the character/like a human being? Did it advance the scene or characterization?
- Clarity: Are the physical events difficult to follow? Did the figurative language work for you? What sentences felt like a stair went missing?
- Pacing/structure: Did the fic feel like it was building up to something, and did that something happen as you expected? Were there too many tangents? Did any particular moments strike you or feel out of place?

Please don't feel you should stick to or answer all of those. Anything that occurs to you would interest me! ♥

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Any level you're comfortable with

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[personal profile] misspinkman
I want to receive feedback by:
- Comment on my DW post in this community

Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...): AO3. Any, though I am particularly interested in feedback on my two new 13RW fics about Bryce ("feel like you're treading water..." and "won't you allow yourself fall...")

My works' fandoms and content notes are: First fic has allusions to non-con but nothing explicit, the second includes references to non-con that are important to the story but again, not explicit

I have these questions for readers: Are these works effective? What would you like to see more/less of? Where could I improve the focus? Do the characters ring true to life?

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: 3
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[personal profile] lirin_lirilla
I want to receive feedback by: Email (lirin.lirilla@gmail.com) or comment on this post

Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything on my AO3 written 2017 or later, except for (single/double/triple/sequences of) drabbles. AO3 link with earlier works & drabbles filtered out

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Vastly assorted, mostly book fandoms, mostly gen, mostly G-rated, quite a few crossovers. The fandoms I've written in the most are: Oxford Time Travel Universe - Connie Willis, The Scarlet Pimpernel - Baroness Orczy, The Lord of the Rings - J. R. R. Tolkien, Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling, White Collar, Marvel Cinematic Universe.

I have these questions for readers: I'm very interested to hear whatever thoughts you have on the story you choose, but in case you need more to work from, here's some general questions that you can take or leave as you wish.

What did you think of my title, summary, and/or tags? Is the ending strong enough, & what could I have done to make it stronger? Does the story feel the right length, or do you think it needed to be longer or shorter (and if so, in what way—cutting/adding scenes, or different pacing)? Did I start the story at a good point, or should I have started it later (was there too much setup? should I have started in medias res and flashed back?) or should I have started it earlier (in which case what did you feel was missing?)? How's my pacing? How's my balance of dialogue vs. description? For extended dialogue passages, is the choreography of the characters' actions okay or do they need to be doing more or less? For fics in tight third (which is most of them), were there any points where you were unclear on whose POV it was? Do you think I chose the right POV to write the fic from, or you do think a different character's would have been better? If there are any OCs in the fic, what did you think of what I did with them?

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: (3) something in the middle; I'd like to hear what you liked and not just what you didn't, and I'd prefer if you weren't too blunt about it, but I'm okay with you throwing a whole bunch of "here's what you need to do better" at me.

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alchemise

Aug. 5th, 2020 07:18 pm
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[personal profile] alchemise
I want to receive feedback by: Commenting on this post or email (alchemise at gmail dot com).

Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything from 2018-now. [archiveofourown.org profile] alchemise

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Arrow, DC's Legends of Tomorrow, Schitt's Creek, Batwoman/Titans crossover, The Defenders (TV), Dirk Gently's Holistic Detective Agency (TV), Crazy Rich Asians (2018), Black Panther (2018), various songs.
I think my tags indicate what's in my CNTW fics, but I'm happy to clarify anything if it's unclear!

I have these questions for readers:
I like to try and write different genres, so I'm curious how well I do at them. But really, anything you want to provide feedback on would be amazing.
If shipfic: does the fic sell the ship well? If there's anything sexy, is it hot?
If comedy: is it funny/amusing?
If horror: is it scary/creepy?
General: are there places where the pacing is off, things don't make sense, characters seem out of character (or don't talk like people do)?

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: 1 - direct

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ictus

Aug. 6th, 2020 09:35 am
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[personal profile] scansionictus
I want to receive feedback by: Either by comment on my post here, Discord PM (ictus#9826), or email (nonanonamcbiba@gmail.com).

Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything I've published at my AO3. Safe fandom: Voltron: Legendary Defender. Safe work: all they do is watch us kill.

My works' fandoms and content notes are: DC Comics, Umbrella Academy (TV), Star Trek: AOS, Inception, Hannibal, Fight Club, Birds of Prey (2020). All of my fic is tagged appropriately, but in general there is canon-typical violence/disturbing themes for a lot of my fandoms (DC Comics, Hannibal, Fight Club). My Umbrella Academy fic contains sibling incest and references to drug addiction.

I have these questions for readers: I would love your general impressions on prose, characterisation (if you're not familiar with the fandom, I would like to know if it's internally consistent/if the character's motivations are clear), plot, and execution. Also whether or not I strike the balance between "too descriptive" and "too sparse" in my writing. Most of my fics are short and consist of a single scene, but for longer works with a more developed plot, I would love feedback on the pacing and whether you think the plot/character arcs were well-developed. Feedback on title, summary, tags, etc. is also welcome. These aspects are just a jumping-off point so don't feel as though you have to touch on everything, but generally speaking I would like your honest opinion on what did and did not work for you, even if it's not something I've mentioned here.

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: Anywhere between a 2 and a 5 would work for me!

Thank you to everyone who gave me feedback, I'll respond in the coming days. This post is now closed for additional concrit, thank you!
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[personal profile] apiroscsizmak
I want to receive feedback by: Email, discord PM, and commenting on this post are all fine
scary turtle#6845
supersecretsockman@gmail.com

Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything on my AO3 from the past year except for Absolutely Quackers.

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Mostly TMA. One Les Mis fic. All tagged thoroughly. All explicit, non-con. Some underage and incest.

I have these questions for readers: I am most interested in ways I can make my porn hotter. Possible questions to address that include: What strengths and weaknesses do you find in the writing? Are there parts that drag/feel rushed? Are there parts that feel empty, or like they could use more emotional or physical grounding? I notice that a lot of the fics I find hottest have a strong sense of specificity (to the canon, to the setting, and/or to the characters). Is that something I manage in my own writing? Are there certain places you think could benefit from a stronger sense of specificity? Are there trends you notice in my writing that hinder the overall story, distract you as a reader, or weaken the emotional/physical/sexual intensity of the story?

Don't feel the need to address every question, and if you have other ideas of how to approach the critique, feel free to run with those instead! I just included these in case you want something to springboard off of. The main thrust of what I am looking for more broadly is: What are the general strengths? What could I change/do better/improve on? And how can I maximize hotness?

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between: 3-ish (anywhere between 2-4 would be fine)

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[personal profile] enisy
I want to receive feedback by: Comment where the work is published (AO3), or here in this thread if you prefer.

Here are the works I want feedback on
: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Enisy Anything from 2020 except these safe works: Makeover Day; Pretty Girls Keep One Foot on the Floor; Rider, Rider

I would especially appreciate feedback on any of the following:
My works' fandoms and content notes are: Available on AO3.

I have these questions for readers
: What is your overall impression? What could be improved? How does the pacing seem to you?

I would prefer gentle (5) or direct (1) feedback, or something in between
: 2-3

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morbane: A Haunter grasping the hilt of a light saber (HaunterSith)
[personal profile] morbane
If interested, please comment below with your details! If you want to post your feedback request to the comm, please fill in and comment with the details below, but hold off making your own community post until your comment has been acknowledged.

Sign-ups are now closed




My contact detail for the mod

(email, Dreamwidth, Discord handle) is:


Giving feedback

I'm interested in giving feedback on [choose either or both]:
-Specific extracts, including drafts
-My choice of an author's published works

I will not read the following content: ... (for example, E or M ratings; infidelity; eye gore)

I'm familiar with these fandoms: ...

(As well as listing specific fandoms - or if listing them all is a hassle - maybe note if you're more likely to be familiar with fandoms in a particular category, like live-action Western TV, or JRPGs, or YA books.)

The range of gentle to direct feedback that I can give is: ... (Would you prefer to give gentle-to-middling feedback? middling-to-direct feedback? All ranges?)

Other notes about what I'd like to give concrit on: ...

For example, if you'd rather give detailed line-by-line feedback on shorter works, or answer specific questions on longer works (up to 10k? longer, up to 50k?), or you have preferred genres you'd like to read even if you can't be matched by fandom.

Here's a text box of the Giving Feedback sections to fill in, if you like




If you only want to sign up to give concrit, you're done. If you also want to get concrit, you need to fill in the next section as well.

Getting feedback

To submit my work I will [choose one]:
-Make a post on this community with links to my published works (Please wait after commenting for mod confirmation)
-Make a post on this community with extracts in it under cuts (Please wait after commenting for mod confirmation)
-Send my sign-up information, including links or extracts, to the mod by email/other

If you want to post on DW but you don't have an account or you are unfamiliar with cut text code, please say so and I can either format the code for you or make a post for you.

I want to receive feedback by [choose any of that suit you]:
-Email
-Discord PM
-Comment on my DW post in this community
-Comment where the work is published (AO3, ff.net, LJ)
-Other

Other information to include when posting to DW or emailing work to mod

Which works / Safe works: If you plan to link to something like an AO3 or ff.net profile, or journal, please say which works you are or aren't interested in getting feedback on (ie, anything complete and written after 2016? Anything except for specific "safe" works?)

Feedback questions: If you have general questions about your writing that could apply to any of your works, or, if you are asking for feedback on specific works or extracts, please include any questions you have! Ie: does the ending work, were the characters' motivations clear, did the twist make sense in retrospect, did you like the descriptions...

Tagging and content: If you want feedback on unpublished pieces, or pieces that don't otherwise have content tags, please say what fandoms they're in and also include notes on whether they include major character death, gore/violence, rape, noncon, or dubcon, underage sex, incest, or other content that may be offputting. I may also send you questions about more specific content before matching you with your concrit-givers.

What level of feedback: Pick which describes you:
1. "Direct criticism is fine; don't be afraid to be blunt"

3. "I'm in the middle; please practice your tact along with your insight."

5. "I prefer gentle feedback; don't lie to me, but please be kind."


Here's a text box of the Getting Feedback section to fill in, if you like


morbane: A cute, fierce Raichu with a light saber (Reychu)
[personal profile] morbane
Hello!

I propose this schedule, in EDT:

Sign-ups: August 2-7 (late August 2)
Matching: August 8-10
Deadline: August 24
Pinch hit deadline: August 31.


Signing up to this swap means:
  • You will provide at least one work to the mod that is between 500 and 10,000 words, or link to published works in this range. You can ask for concrit on longer works as long as your concrit-giver also has shorter works to choose from. (If you want to ask for concrit on longer works only, you can submit a sign-up, but you aren't guaranteed any matches. You will not be required to submit concrit of your own unless there are also participants willing to give you concrit.)

  • You are prepared to give content notes on your works - warnings, (optional) genres. (If they're already published, the tags may be enough.)

  • You commit to giving feedback on two different works, ideally for two different authors - either line-by-line feedback or summary notes of at least 300 {change from 400} words each. These works might not be in canons you know, and may be up to 10,000 words long. This feedback should be designed to be useful to the author and should be written in the spirit of appreciating and acknowledging what the author may have been trying to do with a piece.

  • You are prepared to give feedback either privately or publicly, according to the author's preference.

  • You will let the mod know as promptly as possible if you can't give concrit on works you're matched to, or can't give concrit at all due to unexpected factors.


Although some concrit-givers may be willing to give feedback on drafts, please don't expect a full beta job or detailed grammatical corrections.



Here is a draft (not final!) sign-up form. I'll make a post with it on August 2; comments on that post, where you fill out the form, will be screened. Comments on THIS post won't be - please don't sign up yet, but general thoughts are welcome..

Draft sign-up form


My contact detail for the mod (email, Dreamwidth, Discord handle) is:

Getting feedback

To submit my work I will [choose one]:
-Make a post on this community with links to my published works
-Make a post on this community with extracts in it under cuts
-Send my sign-up information, including links or extracts, to the mod by email/other

If you want to post on DW but you don't have an account or you are unfamiliar with cut text code, please say so and I can either format the code for you or make a post for you.

I want to receive feedback by [choose any of that suit you]:
-Email
-Discord PM
-Comment on my DW post in this community
-Comment where the work is published (AO3, ff.net, LJ)
-Other

Other information to include when posting to DW or emailing work to mod

Which works / Safe works: If you plan to link to something like an AO3 or ff.net profile, or journal, please say which works you are or aren't interested in getting feedback on (ie, anything complete and written after 2016? Anything except for specific "safe" works?)

Feedback questions: If you have general questions about your writing that could apply to any of your works, or, if you are asking for feedback on specific works or extracts, please include any questions you have! Ie: does the ending work, were the characters' motivations clear, did the twist make sense in retrospect, did you like the descriptions...

Tagging and content: If you want feedback on unpublished pieces, or pieces that don't otherwise have content tags, please say what fandoms they're in and also include notes on whether they include major character death, gore/violence, rape, noncon, or dubcon, underage sex, incest, or other content that may be offputting. I may also send you questions about more specific content before matching you with your concrit-givers.

Giving feedback

I'm interested in giving feedback on [choose either or both]:
-Specific extracts, including drafts
-My choice of an author's published works

I will not read the following content: ... (for example, E or M ratings; infidelity; eye gore)

I'm familiar with these fandoms: ...

(As well as listing specific fandoms - or if listing them all is a hassle - maybe note if you're more likely to be familiar with fandoms in a particular category, like live-action Western TV, or JRPGs, or YA books.)

Other notes about what I'd like to give concrit on: ...

For example, if you'd rather give detailed line-by-line feedback on shorter works, or answer specific questions on longer works, or you have preferred genres you'd like to read even if you can't be matched by fandom.




There was a suggestion earlier about trying to match on genres. What genres would work? As a starting point, here's a list of genres from fandom5k - could we cut those down or are there any we should add?

Suggestions - and concrit - highly welcome.


ETA

If you want, you can sign up to give concrit only. That will be hugely welcome! There will also be pinch hits.

You cannot sign up to receive concrit only. However, I'm considering a "throw anything into the ring" period after the main swap, sort of like a Madness round, where people aren't guaranteed concrit but don't have to promise to give any either. That will depend on how easy it is to organise, how much energy I have left after the main round, and how many people are keen.
morbane: A Haunter grasping the hilt of a light saber (HaunterSith)
[personal profile] morbane
Anon and signed-in comments both welcome

Who would be interested in making their own post in the community (as part of the August event) for feedback to be posted under it, and who would prefer to request and receive feedback entirely privately (ie, by email)?

Suggested resources:
-guides for concrit
-a set of questions for a reviewer to consider
-a list of genres for people to use to describe their fic, if submitting extracts

If requesting concrit on any published works, do people have a date cut-off after which the work is too old for them to want feedback on it? Maybe we can agree on a default age.

What do you find most valuable in concrit?
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