concrit_x | Concrit for Enisy

I want to receive feedback by: Comment on this post or comment on AO3.

Here are the works I want feedback on: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Enisy Anything from 2020/2021 except: Blowing Smoke Rings in the Second Circle; But It’s the Perfect Place to Start, My Love; Makeover Day; Pretty Girls Keep One Foot on the Floor; Rider, Rider. Here is a view with old and "safe" works excluded.

I would especially appreciate feedback on any of the following:

Everyone Speaks Standard Here (Star Trek: DS9, 1.8K)
Neptune in the Rhine (Ace Attorney, 5.5K)
Motion/Stasis (Ace Attorney, rated Explicit, adopted sibling incest, 2.8K)
Sorry I Could Not Travel Both (OW, rated Explicit, noncon, 3.4K)
Then They Went to the Valley Below (OW, rated Explicit, noncon, 3K)
Predilection (OW, rated Explicit, 2.2K)
Credo (Mass Effect Original Trilogy, 1.8K)

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Available on AO3.

I have these questions for readers: What is your general impression? What could be improved? Is the prose too flowery at any point? Does the ending land properly?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Direct is fine, as long as you don't only list negatives.

Comments to this post will be: Unscreened.