Concrit for sadisticsparkle

[sadisticsparkle]

I want to receive feedback by : comments on this post or where the work is posted

Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):

https://archiveofourown.org/users/sadisticsparkle/works

no safe works!

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Marvel (Steve/Tony), for the most part no warnings apply. However, a lot of my Explicit fic is dubcon or CNTW.

I have these questions for readers:

I welcome anything but I have some more specific questions:

- Is the sentences structure samey/repetitive?
- Are there any moments where the story makes a jump you don't quite follow? I've always had an issue with assuming the reader is in my head and not explaining things enough.
- How do the endings work? Are they too sudden?
- How is the paratext working: titles, summaries, tags?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I don't mind getting blunt feedback, but I do prefer it if there's also some praise alongside it.

Comments to this post will be: screened until May 15

Concrit for Ember_Keelty

[ember_keelty]

I want to receive feedback by : Comment where the work is published (preferred) OR comment on this DW post if that's easier/more comfortable for the reviewer for whatever reason

Here are the works I want feedback on: Anything posted to my Ao3 account (Ember_Keelty) from 2017 to the present.

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Lots of Dragon Age, plus various magical girl anime. Content notes and ratings vary from work to work but are listed on AO3.

I have these questions for readers:
For the fics that have original characters, or quasi-original characters like fleshed out Dragon Age PCs, I'd be particularly interested to hear readers' reactions to and thoughts and feelings about them. For both canon characters and OCs, I'm interested in whether it makes sense that they do and say the things they do, given your understanding of who they are and what's going on with them from both the fic itself and, if applicable, the canon. For fics that have action sequences, I'd be interested to hear how those flow, whether they're clear enough to follow, and whether they're engaging. For the one Utena fic, The Limitations of Wax, I'd like to hear about what kind of sense or meaning you got out of it and how you came to that conclusion. For any of my fics, I'd like feedback regarding what kind of emotional impact they have, if any: which characters you sympathize with and why, things that move you, things that leave you cold, etc. But ultimately I'm interested in hearing anything at all that stands out to you in either a good or bad way.

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: I'm interested in hearing any impressions at all, good or bad, and you should feel free to be as direct as you like in either case.

Comments to this post will be: unscreened

Concrit for Enisy

[enisy]

I want to receive feedback by: Comment on this post or comment on AO3.

Here are the works I want feedback on: https://archiveofourown.org/users/Enisy Anything from 2020/2021 except: Blowing Smoke Rings in the Second Circle; But It’s the Perfect Place to Start, My Love; Makeover Day; Pretty Girls Keep One Foot on the Floor; Rider, Rider. Here is a view with old and "safe" works excluded.

I would especially appreciate feedback on any of the following:

• Everyone Speaks Standard Here (Star Trek: DS9, 1.8K)
• Neptune in the Rhine (Ace Attorney, 5.5K)
• Motion/Stasis (Ace Attorney, rated Explicit, adopted sibling incest, 2.8K)
• Sorry I Could Not Travel Both (OW, rated Explicit, noncon, 3.4K)
• Then They Went to the Valley Below (OW, rated Explicit, noncon, 3K)
• Predilection (OW, rated Explicit, 2.2K)
• Credo (Mass Effect Original Trilogy, 1.8K)

My works' fandoms and content notes are: Available on AO3.

I have these questions for readers: What is your general impression? What could be improved? Is the prose too flowery at any point? Does the ending land properly?

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: Direct is fine, as long as you don't only list negatives.

Comments to this post will be: Unscreened.

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OFFERS | Giving feedback

I'm interested in giving feedback on [delete irrelevant options]:
-Specific extracts, including drafts
-My choice of an author's published works

I will not read the following content: ... [for example, E or M ratings; infidelity; eye gore]

I'm familiar with these fandoms: ...
[As well as listing specific fandoms - or if listing them all is a hassle - maybe note if you're more likely to be familiar with fandoms in a particular category, like live-action Western TV, or JRPGs, or YA books.]

My preferred style of feedback is: ... [Please describe how you hope to approach feedback, especially in terms of tact, bluntness, praise, or focusing on areas of improvement. For example, "Don't match me to someone who only wants to hear about flaws - I want to talk about what I enjoyed as well," or "Please match me to someone who welcomes blunt feedback - it's easier for me to communicate if I'm not anxious about damaging confidence with an awkward phrase," or "Please send first-time crit-seekers to me - encouragement is my strong suit," or "I can adapt my style to my recipient's preferences, but I naturally fall closer to the direct end of feedback than the gentle end." You won't get a perfect match but I hope to avoid total clashes.]

Other notes about what I'd like to give concrit on: ...
[For example, if you'd rather give detailed line-by-line feedback on shorter works, or answer specific questions on longer works (up to 10k? longer, up to 50k?), or you have preferred genres you'd like to read even if you can't be matched by fandom.]

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REQUESTS | Getting feedback

I want to receive feedback by [choose any of that suit you]:
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-Comment on my DW post in this community
-Comment where the work is published (AO3, ff.net, LJ)
-Other

Here are the works I want feedback on (optional: and my safe works are...):
[if you're including long extracts in a post, please consider using cuts]
[If you plan to link to something like an AO3 or ff.net profile, or journal, please say which works you are or aren't interested in getting feedback on (ie, anything complete and written after 2016? Anything except for specific "safe" works?)]

Tagging and content - for extracts:
[If you want feedback on unpublished pieces, or pieces that don't otherwise have content tags, please say what fandoms they're in and also include notes on whether they include major character death, gore/violence, rape, noncon, or dubcon, underage sex, incest, or other content that may be offputting. I may also send you questions about more specific content before matching you with your concrit-givers.]

Feedback questions:
[If you have general questions about your writing that could apply to any of your works, or, if you are asking for feedback on specific works or extracts, please include any questions you have! Ie: does the ending work, were the characters' motivations clear, did the twist make sense in retrospect, did you like the descriptions…]

The style of feedback I prefer to receive is: ... [Please describe what style of feedback would be ideal. For example, "Please focus on where I can improve - don't worry about sugarcoating your criticism," or "I would appreciate gentle feedback; don't lie to me, but please be kind," or "I'm interested in hearing any impressions at all - good or bad. However, some cushioning when describing what you didn't like would be good." You will not get a perfect match, but I hope to avoid total clashes. You may also want to indicate how interested you are in spelling and grammar fixes.]

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